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Shall I compare thee to a Heaven’s flame?
Thou art more wild and more bold.
Whose eyes dance with tiny immortal embers.
Thou make’st a mockery of the angel’s song
Saints bow to the intensity of thou’s  purest soul
Thy Helen’s face cannot compare’st to thee
Who warms the bitter coldness of those passed on
One that heals all scars to flesh and spirit.
Forever will thou’s passion burn brightly
Love shall envy thy grace and kindness
But Death shall not touch a creature with such strength as thee
For thou art the holiest of all God’s mighty phoenixes.
©2007-2009 ~Arleana
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I wrote this for my Honors Lit. class. Our teacher wanted us to write our own rendition of the "Shall I compare thee to a Summer's Day" poem. I, in all off my english overacheiver glory, wrote it in Shakespearian. This is pretty much everyone's favorite non vampire poem.

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Ooo~, nicely done Shakespearian.

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Though, the full stops looked kind of odd in a poem like this, but whatever.

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